Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-33603920-20190223075919/@comment-39385741-20191025233646

Okay, now it's time for me to explain everything wrong with your "laws".

"There are two main groups of dominant beings that rule over the Earth: Humanity, and Monstrosity."

The two races are called humans and monsters, not humanity and monstrosity.

"Humans have physical forms, composed mainly of deoxyribonucleic acid, and slight traces of magic. The ratio of DNA/magic can vary depending on the human's diet."

I'm pretty sure that the magic is in the human's SOUL, not their vessel. Also, I'm not sure where you heard that "the ratio of DNA/magic can vary depending on the human's diet," because it's not true.

"Monsters have magical forms, composed mainly of magic, and slight traces of deoxyribonucleic acid. The ratio of magic/DNA can vary depending on a monster's diet."

When does the game ever say that monsters have DNA?

"Adult monsters don't age until they have children. As the children are growing up, their parents will become "older". If there are enough adult children, a monster will attain old age, and will be more susceptible to death."

That's only true for Boss Monsters.

"Monster ageing can be completely halted by the death of all their children. In some/most cases, it can even rejuvenate them."

Again, that's only true for Boss Monsters.

"Both groups have souls. These souls are heart shapes that can store memories, wills and traits of the owner."

Well, actually, the SOUL is a source of love, hope, compassion, and life.

"It takes almost every living monster soul to equal the power of one human soul."

Actually, the game never specifically says that. Flowey absorbed the six human souls, and (almost) all the monster souls. He gained the power to destroy the barrier. But, maybe he could have done it with less monster souls.

"Monster souls are so weak that absorption of a monster soul from a living monster would require immense power."

Can you please type this in a way that I can understand it?

"Monsters die by decomposing, falling into dust. Once killed, monsters' souls will shatter away. Unless the monster is a Boss Monster, the soul will shatter instantly."

The monsters don't decompose. When a monster dies, it turns into dust. If it is a normal monster, its soul vanishes. If it is a boss monster, its soul remains for only a few seconds.

"Some humans and monsters exhibit a special substance called Determination. If one has more of that trait, one can generate further stamina and health before exhaustion, injury and/or death."

All humans have determination. Monsters can feel determination, but they do not have the actual substance within them. If a monster has enough determination, feeling or substance, they will be revived after death.

"The being in a given universe with the most Determination will be granted complete control over the timeline of the universe since they first became that being. They can save, load/continue, reset/restart and true reset."

Only the player, the being with control over the protaginist, can reset and true reset.

"If someone has had the most Determination before, before they were overtaken, they can likewise retain all memories in "previous" universes, except for in a true reset, a reset in which only the resetter remembers anything, and all other interuniverse memories are wiped."

The protaginist does not remember anything after a true reset, but the player does.

"If Determination is injected into something physical and inanimate (unsure if it needs to be living, like a plant or pathogen) and it contains heavy traces of monster dust on it, it can become sentient. That monster's memories will soak into that, and it will have slight metamorphic abilities."

Correction: If determination is injected into something physical or inanimate, and the vessel absorbs the dust of a monster, the monster will be revived in the form of that vessel. It will be unable to feel love, hope, or compassion, since it has no soul, but if it absorbs enough souls, it will be back to its original form, with some side effects. (It will be extremely powerful, and the souls might rebel against the monster)

If there are any mistakes in my correction, please point them out.