Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26006155-20190131130037/@comment-26006155-20190401041424

Ok, I've fully proofread Draft 3, and basically made a Draft 4. I've tweaked everything except The Darkest Experiment screenplay about to the point where I'm getting diminishing returns.

Here's Draft 4 on my webpage: http://www.blackfootferret.name/WritingFolder/Asriel%20Gaster%204th%20Draft.pdf and the Google Docs page https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sjVwWf-MKjP9OuXqsFWOOl8Vu0jOxwapD83rIRHst-E/edit?usp=sharing

128 pages. What have I done.