Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-38557913-20190810155131/@comment-35757757-20190813150152

Sure

But first a bit of a background:

Randomtale is kind of a mix of whatever. i_am_a_duckhead is a joke miniboss with horrible dialogue, there are some original characters (like the “Breezies” for example), some of the characters aren’t even replaced (Toriel is still Toriel), the story starts after Frisk leaves the first area (Called the Delta Ruins as a Deltarune joke basically) because I didn’t want to write it honestly, and most of the stuff on my blog is either irrelevant or outdated so I’m only linking the actually important stuff. Don’t try to predict what comes next; you’re gonna fail (hopefully I used a semicolon right). Also I feel like the dialogue isn’t that good but I’m not sure.

Just wanted to tell you those things so you can prepare yourselves

Sorry I was late I was doing stuff (Even if I joke about not having a life, I do have one).

Here’s the story:

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale:_Opening_(Story_coming_soon)

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale-_Chapter_1

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale_Chapter_2

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale_Chapter_3

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale_Chapter_4

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale_Chapter_5

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Randomtale_Chapter_6

That’s the story so far. It’s not over yet.

I basically just want to know your thoughts. It could help me improve

...also I like knowing people’s opinions on stuff I make/like

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